Oh my gosh, this game is so old but I feel compelled to review it because I see a lot of potential here, something I cant say for many horror flash games on newgrounds
The atmosphere is very, very surreal and that could be because the quality of everything is so low. I don't really care if that was on purpose or not, it works well.
This game doesnt have to rely on popscares, which I like, though the game isn't necessarily scary and instead it's very bizarre and surreal. I'm very surprised one of the influences you listed wasn't silent hill seeing as the concept is very psych horror
Id say this game is fairly successful at what it tries to do, and doesnt resort to the cliches!
Out of all these goofy horror flash games on this site, yours is probably the best Ive seen so far
I dunno if you ever made a sequel but if you did I hope you didnt resort to what the other flashes are doing